Examples:
- Reaching the heart, a bypass was performed on the severely blocked arteries.
- Reaching the heart, the surgeon performed a bypass on the severely blocked arteries.
- The second one is correct, because the person performing the action is named in the subject of the sentence so the opening phrase doesn't dangle.
- Determined to learn to read, Wanda was delighted to discover that there was an adult literacy program in her apartment building.
- Determined to learn to read, an adult literacy program in Wanda's apartment was just what she had been looking for.
- The first one is correct, because the subject of the sentence names the actor.
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