Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Dangling Modifiers

A dangling modifier is when the meaning of a sentence is left "dangling" to mean something else because something is left out.

Examples:
  • Reaching the heart, a bypass was performed on the severely blocked arteries. 
  • Reaching the heart, the surgeon performed a bypass on the severely blocked arteries. 
    • The second one is correct, because the person performing the action is named in the subject of the sentence so the opening phrase doesn't dangle.  

  • Determined to learn to read, Wanda was delighted to discover that there was an adult literacy program in her apartment building.  
  • Determined to learn to read, an adult literacy program in Wanda's apartment was just what she had been looking for. 
    • The first one is correct, because the subject of the sentence names the actor.

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